The bullet in Option 1b is better.
“Skills” are not clear in the bullet of Option 1a.
Review the Contact Information section of your CV. Compare it to the example provided.
http://www.linkedin.com/pub/johndoe/27/36/6b3
Local address
222 John Street
Waterloo, ON, N3A 2N1
519-888-5555
www.jdoeportfolio.com
jdoe@email.address
604-777-2222 (cell)
Permanent Address
#301-85 King Street West
Vancouver, BC, V6B 4W1
604-777-1234
Review the Research and Professional Interests sections (if applicable) in your CV. Compare it to the example provided.
Research: Market Pricing of Accounting Information; Market Efficiency and Regularities; Fundamental Analysis; Economic Consequence and Valuation Effects of Accounting Standards
Teaching: Financial Accounting; Managerial Accounting
Research Interests: Sensing, automation, and information technology for construction engineering and management, infrastructure asset management, optimization, decision theory, and computation modeling for avid engineering systems
Review the Summary of Qualifications section (if applicable) in your CV. Compare it to the example provided.
Review the Education section of your CV. Compare it to the example provided. For illustrative purposes, sections of different CVs are used.
Electrical and Computer Engineering, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, September 20xx – present
Thesis: Model Synchronization for Software Evolution
Thesis supervisor: Professor John Smith
Relevant courses: Application of Integer Optimization to Engineering Design, Statistical Signal Processing, Queuing Systems, Algorithm Design and Analysis, Communications Over Fading Dispersive Channels
Computer Science, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, September 20xx
Thesis: Enhancing Domain-Specific Software Architecture Recovery
Thesis supervisor: Professor Brenda Dixon
Computer Science, Co-op Program, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, September 20xx
Review the Research, Teaching, Industry, Service sections of your CV. Compare it to the examples provided. For illustrative purposes, sections of different CVs are used.
Research Assistant, Department of Mechanical Engineering, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, 20xx – 20xx
Research Assistant, Department of Mechanical Engineering, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, 20xx – 20xx
The bullet in Option 1b is better.
“Skills” are not clear in the bullet of Option 1a.
Writing Coach, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, Sept. 20xx – April 20xx
Writing Coach, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, Sept. 20xx – April 20xx
The bullet in Option 2a is better.
Bullet 2b is long-winded; save this level of detail for an interview.
Teaching Assistant, Chemistry, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, Jan. – April 20xx
Teaching Assistant, Chemistry, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, Jan. – April 20xx
The bullet in Option 3a is better. It shows a successful result (i.e., 150 written assignments) and makes the team effort clear.
Bullet 3b focuses on the course and does not provide enough detail. The words “showing excellent time management and interpersonal skills” should be removed: the employer will decide what skills are demonstrated. Include this type of information in the Summary of Qualifications if relevant.
Review additional sections not listed elsewhere in your CV. Compare it to the example provided. For illustrative purposes, sections of different CVs are used.
President, Graduate Student Association, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, Sept. 20xx – June 20xx
Graduate Student Rep, Women in Engineering, Civil Engineering Department, University of Waterloo, Waterloo, ON, Sept. 20xx – April 20xx