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Writing your letter: Feedback

Letter Writing: Feedback

Review your response submissions below.

Organizational skills

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I have excellent organizational skills. Fulfilling the demands of a full-time undergraduate education, working twenty hours per week at a part-time job, and being active in a variety of campus organizations have enhanced my ability to organize, prioritize, and consistently meet objectives. These skills would enable me to effectively meet the many challenges of a sales position.

Customer service experience

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Working frontline at the University of Waterloo's Turnkey Desk has helped me develop a wide range of customer service skills. I stay up-to-date by reading a variety of materials related to the University in order to provide students with current and accurate information. My supervisor has commended me for my ability to respond quickly, accurately, and in a friendly, welcoming manner to a long line of students.

Leadership abilities

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As captain of a varsity team at the University of Waterloo, I demonstrated my ability to motivate and mentor my team members. It is important for me to be supportive and upbeat, to ensure that my teammates stay positive, and to offer encouragement when needed. For several years, our team has won the “most optimistic” award because of our positive outlook and spirit.

Communication Skills

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Both my oral and written communication skills are well developed. As a speech communications major at the University of Waterloo, I have had the opportunity to deliver several well-received presentations of different lengths and in various formats—including one designed to persuade the audience. I have also completed three work term reports and received a grade of "excellent" on each of them.

University of Waterloo

Centre for Career Development